This is my first story ever that I have actually decided to publish... I mean I'm always writing on my notebook and stuff... I doddle on it too... lol...
the thing is that I just never wanted or never thought they were good enough n I still think that way... but I have become brave over the years and decided to finally do it... I don't really much about writing or anything... but I do know that it took me a really long time to write this one chap...  its like my baby...
Please do critique it (hopefully constructive criticism)....
AND PLEASE... I'M NOT A NORMAL PERSON, WHY DO I SAY THIS? 'CAUSE THE FIRST STORY I DECIDED TO POST IS YAOI...
SO U DON'T LIKE... THEN DON'T READ AND B POLITE ABOUT IT...
MY CHAP ITS EXTREMELY SHORT...
ANYWAYS, ENJOY!!!

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Ch.1

~The beginning~
By: Maritza-capullo or mayoranime

 

      It was a stormy night in the middle of April, when I suddenly saw what I though to be a burgler, but it end it up been just a shadow of the cloths that were outside. I was so scared that I called up my closest friend, Perry. He has always been my friend ever since we graduated from middle school.

 

      He said that he would be there within 15 minutes, all I could do was wait for him. It had been raining all day and now it was the middle of the night. While I waited, the storm got more drastic, and so thunder came down, making the most outregious sounds. The faster the thunder came, the more scared I became. By the time Perry got to my house I was trembeling like a little scared puppy. Perry opened the door and let himself in, he saw me sitting in the corner of the living room and came close to me, suddenly another horrible sound came down, I junmped up and end it up facing Perry, which I hadn't notice him until then. When he saw me jump he hughed me tightly, making me feel the safest person at that moment in time, thats when I noticed that when I am in his arms, thats when all of my worries disappear and he brings peace to my soul. While I was thinking these I also noticed that he was wet from head to toe. Wooried I separated my self from him to let him go dry himself, but secretely what I wanted was to see him all wet, exposed like that, soaked in water.

      Once I realized this I try to hide it and burried it in my subconcious... its easy to say, but so hard to accomplish... Specially, when I have my closes friend in the bathroom taking a shower, a guy that I think its cute.

      I guess I should explained a little about how we bacame friends and to the point where we are right now.

      Our lives have always been circleling around us two. I mean we have been friends for so long now, not to say that we don't have any other friends, because we do, but we like each others company so, we are always spending our time together as friends.

      I'm a social worker now and he is a police man. Our jobs are different and similar at the same time. Different in the way that they are different careers, yet similar in the way that we help others. To be honest Perry has always looked after me, during middle school I use to be picked on by some of the other kids and when I met him all of that stopped, since he defended me and protected me. I always thought of him as a hero! He was always nice to me, but I never thought of him as more than a friend. He was always there for me when I need it him. We both were there for each other, when I broke up with a someone or had a fight with another friend he was there to console me and help me figure something out and vice versa.

      My mom and his mom bacame good friends because of us and they would always say that we we would always be together, because we were such good friends; but we just never paid any attention to it and never cared, 'cause we knew it was true. During college (which we end up going to the same college) we would party together and if I got a little too drunk and started doing things with someone (like making out or something) he would come and help me out and take care me no matter how drunk he was. For that I've always been thankful!

      People always said that once you graduate from college you and your friends grow apart and that you usually never see each other. When we graduated from college, I was specting us to grow apart too... I thought we wouldn't talk as much anymore, we would probably move to different states or something and maybe just e-mail and see each other in the reunions and that would be it. But to my surprised he decided not to go to far. I was relief that he would only be living about 15 to 20 minutes away (in car, obviously).

      So, the house which I had just moved in is pretty normal size, it used to belong to my aunt, but she gave it to me as a graduation gift... lucky!!! I remodeled it during the summer and by the biggining of spring my new home was ready to live in. It goes without saying that Perry helped me finished it in such a short time, since he was renting an apartment, his moving was actually pretty fast.
 

And now, these brings me to this day of the storm...


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Please review if ya have read this and liked or didn't... it will help me get way better, since I KNOW im not that good at all... compared to all the great people out there...
PLEASE TELL ME WHAT I HAVE DONE RIGHT OR WRONG... LIKE I SAID CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM WOULD BE GOOD....

 

 

 

 

I'M GOING TO ARGENTINA!!!! ON THE 2ND OF FEB...
I'M FUCKING EXTREMELY HAPPY !!
YEY ME!!!

What I do is watch anime, read mangas or people's logs or fanfics.. it's all good...